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Portrait Marie

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I really like the colors and subject choice in this image. The way you've mixed the colors of the face into the background make it seem almost as if she/he is bound to the environment. What I really like is that you didn't do what most people would do and draw the whole face and go for realism, rather you went and did the eyes which makes more of an impact. You really made this piece stand out.

There is one thing I noticed is that the face doesn't seem connected enough to the background, maybe because there aren't enough similar textures shared between the two subjects. Maybe if you had some of the text that is near the face incorporated in the background more there would be more correlation between the background and face.

Vision: I like how you took face and made it your own, rather than making a photo copy of it, I love the impact, and overall emotion conveyed in the piece, it is very well done and looks stunning.

Originality: While things like this have been done before, yours stands out in the fact that it is traditional medium, and has allot of abstract elements incorporated as well as textures all of which make in unique.

Technique: I'm jealous of your capability to create an organic textured background. While there are some very small things that could be improved this drawing is way above and beyond most other pieces.

Impact: Overall, this image alone is rewarding to see, after all the work done.